Today, a colleague and I did a collaborative writing project with two of our literature students, one in senior 5 and the other in senior 2. There was lots of laughter, banter and silent pauses to think of one’s next line. It was the most fun I’ve had in a while.
And now….we (Fidai and Blissa) give you;
a glass of lemonade;

There she is
That pretty angel
Incredibly beautiful
Petite for my appetite
Yet bitter as wormwood
But still as sweet as honey
Bitter sweet lemonade
Confusing to the tongue
A dagger laced with wild honey
An apple covered in thorns
My heart keeps breaking
My soul wanders
My heart thunders
At the beautiful waters
As my hands tremble
Reaching out to hold you
once again.
Back as a fool, I long for you,
Innocent naive fool ,
Lost.
I don’t why I am smiling every after a line read
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Awwww 🙈🙈🙈 that’s the effect we were hoping for.
Thanks Benjamin
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Hi Lisa,
The fact that I loved drinking lemonade and reading a poem that uses lemonade figuratively just blows my mind. I can still feel it’s taste on my tongue. Loved this read. 🥰
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Awwww… Thank you Yuri. We’re glad you liked it.
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Beautiful 🌹
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Thank you 🤍
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An apple covered in thorns…love that!
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Thank you 🤍
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Made me smile in a cranky wierd way! So beautiful 😍
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🥰🥰🥰
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This is lovely. Nice that you all had fun during the process of creating this piece. It shows (smile).
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Thank you. It really was fun. 🥰
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